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Green apples are zombies.


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Your overall composition is great. It is very comical and funny at the same time it is supposed to be more macabre. I LOVE images like this which is why I was so attracted to it.
While this is a good piece to begin with, there are a few things I think you can do to enhance it.

Firstly, there is a lot here you can do with cropping. Play with your levels a little bit more. It would be cool to only see a portion of the red apple while the green apple is in full but still blurred. Or if you want the red apple to continue being the main subject of the piece, maybe it should stay in whole and the green apple be cropped a bit. That's just something to think about if you decide to re-shoot or something. Challenge yourself to make it more dynamic in different ways and it will make the overall photo more appealing.

Another thing you can do is play with your levels more. I like how in this, the red apple is closer to us and the green apple is slightly in the distance. If you make that distance more dramatic by bringing, say, the red apple closer to the front level, the whole composition will pop better.

You have a really good base of a photo here, but I don't think you're quite finished. Stellar idea though! =D
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I really enjoyed this piece! The expressions made me giggle, there really funny! The way the picture is set up seems just right. If anything, I think the glare is a little to bright on the left side of the apple - I kept focusing on that instead of the expression on the food. Also, I would sugest playing with the composition of the photo, maybe playing around with the positions a couple times for it to seem just right. I love the originality that went into this - Zombie apple <3 Overall,great job, I hope you keep up the good work!
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~Kitzy2011 Apr 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The apple in the front is adorable! XD

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Heh. Many chuckles were had. But I still love green apples...

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*acoresjo88 Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Feel free to have a look at it and to comment on and/or :+fav: it, would be really appreciated :)
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~Avis-Hope Feb 16, 2012  Student Writer
thats not going to end well
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Mood: Love ~Blankbustar Feb 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
oh dios :I que monito zombie~ :)
Yay!
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~xStarShine Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
A girl asked a guy if he thought she was pretty and
he said no.
She asked him if he would want to be with her forever and
he said no. She then asked him if she were to leave would he cry, and once
again he replied with a no.
She had heard enough. As she walked away, tears streaming down her face the boy grabbed her arm and said....
"You're not pretty, you're beautiful. I don't want to be with you forever. I NEED to be
with you forever. And I wouldn't cry if you walked away...I'd die"
♥♥ ~~THE END~~ ♥♥
Isn't that sweet? Tonight at midnight your
true love will realize they like you. Something good will happen to
you at 1:00-4:00pm tomorrow, it could be anywhere on IM or email,
outside of school, anywhere! Get ready for the biggest shock of your
life. If you break this chain letter you will be cursed with 10
relationship problems for the next ten years. If you post this to 15
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thats so funny! :laugh:

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~SalmaAshraf Feb 10, 2012   Traditional Artist
XD

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When I look at this photo I think...
Doooom @ o @

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~e11ec Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is just too hilarious! Aww the red apple looks so scared!
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